the blog was made with all the works we have done during this year.
in this blog you will see horror stories, biographies, tv guides and a lot of projects.
I hope you will like it because we put much effort on it.
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Este blog fue hecho con todos los trabajos que hemos realizado durante este año.en este blog ustedes podran ver historias de horror, biografias, guias televisivas y muchos proyectos. Espero que les guste porque nosotros pusimos mucho esfuerzo en crearlo
El blog está muy lindo y el fondo combina con los colores puestos en el mismo.
ResponderEliminarThe blog is very cute and the wallpaper match with the colours of the blog.
Luzardo, Paz, Santarsiero y Colautti
Hi! How are you? Your blog is so nice, the videos are very nice andwe enjoy very much. We like your blog very much. Kisses!
ResponderEliminarHola, como estan? Su blog es muy lindo, los videos nos gustaron mucho y nos divertimos. Nos gusto mucho su blog, Besos!
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ResponderEliminarGood job, my babies!! You stories are really interesting and they make compelling reading. Your topics are original and diverse. We’ve worked a lot during a long time to get this right and I think you’ve shown real improvement in your writing. All the members of your group have always been open to my ongoing suggestions, and you’ve warmly welcomed constructive criticism. You have made a lot of progress since your first drafts and you’ve also increased your accuracy in English. Your blog has been designed very intelligently and beautifully. You’ve made a nice choice of resources to create it. I really think it’s very creative: it has very attractive page layout. Moreover, I think it is actually well organized. But I must give you a piece of advice: don’t forget to make proof-reading not to commit spelling mistakes, or mistakes while copying from your drafts. Despite this, I believe you’ve made so much progress, that you should think to attend an English course regularly to get advantage of your natural talent! You need to give yourselves more credit to your work and inspire yourselves to go a step beyond the basic expectations. I trust you can really get better results. Finally, I must admit something… I’ve made a mistake! I’ve corrected you something that it was OK! It was in Viatri’s story. I don’t know what I was thinking about! The correct form is: “He had a gun but he did not shoot” (not shot!). Sorry… you were right. This deserves an extra point for you! Finally a heads-up message: be careful when writing long stories because I’ve found something contradictory at the beginning and the end of the story Juan’s life. Read it again and you’ll see. Congratulations on a job well done. I’ve always been persuaded that you were capable of doing this : ) !! Mrs. Liliana Lo Preiato
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